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Post by Tengard on Mon Apr 16, 2012 7:58 am

I was bored, and kinda liked this game. Thought it could have another run. After all, third time is the charm! :D

As like the previous two, just add a sentence or three to the story. Try to keep it believable, and no excessive language. :


Daniel Gorcov was a mighty-miner. He could plow through the mines as though they were nothing but soft earth, tunneling miles into the Kharven Mountains each day. With his lucky pick-axe in hand Daniel was the Mining King! But disaster struck one day....When the Ghost King arrived! Ghosts, wraiths, and specters all swarmed the mining camp killing all the miners and making off with their treasure. All except Daniel. Bloody and wounded he retreated deep into the mines to rest. Just as he had regained his strength, he heard a ominous sound behind him. Turning he came face to face with-


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Post by Faelar Laelither on Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:41 am

-A mysterious spirit. The spirit did not assault him like the other ghastly creatures of the mines, but the ghostly man had a look of urgency upon his face.

Daniel, nervous and awestruck, froze up as he locked eyes with the spirit.

"You should not have come..You and yours will be added to the ranks of the restless dead," the spirit said to him coldly.

Daniel regained his composure. "What has led to your unrest?"

The spirit's glowing eyes narrowed. "An unholy gem lurks deep within the earth. Miners like you unearthed it, causing a terrible curse to consume them. The leader amongst them became the fearsome Ghost King. They were the first of us, and those they slew were added to their ranks. The gem remains in an old tunnel where it was found. For us- and soon, your friends- to know rest, it must be destroyed."

Without another word, the spirit faded out of sight. Daniel, baffled by this revelation, decided to-
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Post by Sir Porkchop on Mon Apr 16, 2012 11:30 am

-Recollect his thoughts. He wasn't sure if he was suffering from post-traumatic shock or a spirit had really spoken to him.

Eventually he decided it must have happened. The incident at the mining camp, he shuddered as he pondered deep in thought, was all too real and there must have been a reason behind it.

Anxiety and dread circulated throughout him. He wanted to know more, however at the same time he was deeply frightened and wanted to leave the mine and to get as far away as possible.

Daniel finally came to a conclusion: He must take action. He had witnessed his friends' massacres and wished they could be left to rest in peace. They had done nothing to deserve the horrible fate of death.

He quested into the inter-twining tunnels of the mine in order to find this gem. After a while-
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Re: NEVER ENDING STORY 3!!!!!

Post by Mazer_ on Mon Apr 16, 2012 11:52 am

Classic Minecraft Thing.

He peered into then darkness and two pale white eyes could be seen, no scrap that, it's unoriginal.

-Daniel came across some ghastly pits, he could not see the bottom, he dropped pepper, no sound could be heard...

He lit up a torch. He fastened it to a rope lowered it down, there he saw a series of old, broken battered shafts. He knew he must be close.

He began to pull up then rope, then untied the torch. And dropped the rope back down and began to slide down, he reached the bottom with a thud. Tugging at the role, but alas it was tied down securely.

Nevertheless, he was sure he wouldn't need it, he began to slowly enter one of the old creepy shafts, but-
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Post by Sealand on Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:47 pm

-he found that the tunnel had collapsed. He turned to head back and find another route through when he noticed something.

A faint green light was emitting from the cracks in the rocks.

He put out his torch and the green light washed over the stones that the torch had been lighting. He pulled out his trusty pickaxe and went to work on the collapsed rubble, filling the abandoned tunnels with the dull ching of his pickaxe.

For some, it would take hours. For him, it took minutes. One last, heavy blow from his pickaxe and he found-

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Post by Faelar Laelither on Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:59 pm

-A magical sword buried beneath the rubble. He took the sword in hand to inspect it, and recognized it immediately. It was an iron sword laced with alchemical silver that glowed faintly with magical power- the type of blade that people of the Dawnlands had begun to use in order to combat ghosts, lycanthropes, and vampires whenever they appeared.

Daniel saw this is a very fortunate find- he would need a weapon such as this to defend himself from any aggressive ghosts that he came across. With the rubble cleared, a pathway forward also awaited him into the unknown depths below. He decided to-
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Post by Sealand on Tue Apr 17, 2012 9:41 pm

-continue forward. He stashed his pickaxe and trekked forward, wielding the sword in one hand and a torch in the other.

The noticed that the deeper he went inside the tunnel, the more weird sounds he heard coming through the walls. Whenever he stopped to try and focus on them, they sounds stopped as well. It worried him, but nonetheless he kept to his mission.

Daniel noticed the amount of webs had increased, and he found himself once again blocked by another wall. This time one completely made of web, but he had to get through somehow. So he set his torch to it and-

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Post by Mazer_ on Wed Apr 18, 2012 1:40 am

-It ROARED up in a monstrous blaze(ZeroThree). He jumped back, the fire only lasted for a few seconds, but the tunnel FILLED up with smoke. He coughed and wheezed, finally the smoke faded into the air. As it rose in the tunnels that led out. He wondered if he should go, it'd be is only chance, but he had to find the gem.
He crawled crept through the open wall which was once web, he heard a hiss, and quickly held his sword closer. He saw a strange fiery greeny-blue box.

Suddenly! Some small spiders, smaller than the black ones, these were bluey green spiders, like the box. He got bitten and screamed in agony, he leapt back, and found himself poisoned, he was almost dead but-
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Post by Faelar Laelither on Wed Apr 18, 2012 10:55 pm

-quickly swung his blade at the first spider that lunged at him, slicing it right through the thorax and cutting it in two. He then backed out of the fray and into a safe corner, where he stopped to rest.

After some time, Daniel recovered from the poison, but was feeling weary. The fallen goddess's oversized progeny continued to block his path, and he would need to find a way to get past their nest alive in order to reach what hopefully was the gem at the end of this expansive cavern.

He decided to-
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Post by AJ.Wisteria on Wed Apr 18, 2012 11:07 pm

-take out his pick and tunnel around it. The sheer amount of arachnids swarming about in that room would raise the neck hairs of even the most steadfast and brave-hearted hero. Their chilling screeches echoed through the passage, getting steadily louder as the seconds ticked by, and he realized he was running out of time.

Still weak from the poison he fumbled through his pack for his pick, jamming it into the rock beside him, clearing a small tunnel as quickly as he could. As he entered the tunnel he turned and saw the faint red glow of eyes quickly advancing and, with a gasp, he blocked the exit.

The deafening screeches stayed outside the wall for nearly an hour, but began to fade just as his consciousness did. With what little strength he had left, he attached a torch to the wall and collapsed, the world fading to black around him.

When he awoke-
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Post by Faelar Laelither on Wed Apr 18, 2012 11:40 pm

-he noticed that the sounds of the arachnid infestation had calmed. He decided to take a more willing nap in order to recover his energy.

As he slept, a dream penetrated his thoughts, but it felt more like a message or vision. The spirit that had spoken to him before materialized in his dreams and spoke once again to him. "Let me show you how it all began."

The world around Daniel in his dream transformed to a land of the past, with a strange city. He recognized the city around him by the people who walked the streets and the odd sights and sounds- this was a city before the first cataclysm, when arcane magic was much more frequently practiced.

"During this era of civilization," The spirit explained, "The surface world was kept safe by using arcane magic to keep the evils of the world trapped beneath the earth. This caused a great deal of corruption at the time..."

The world transformed around him again, and Daniel saw a dark, forboding cavern. In the heart of the cavern was an ominous gem that glowed with dark energy. "Some of this concentrated evil took form and became objects of absolute corruption," The spirit continued. "While most of them faded out when the Frazzled One put an end to the first cataclysm, some- like this one- still remain."

"Even if you have no fondness for your comrades or no compassion for the trapped spirits that have been maddened by this gem, you should know that if it is not destroyed, the object could fall into the wrong hands.."

The vision changed, revealing a tall, menacing robed figure that levitated above the ground. The figure reached forth and grabbed the dark gem with his bony hands, and began to amplify it's power, creating tormented, agitated spirits all over the world..

Daniel soon woke up with a start, back in his hidey hole in the wall. He felt more rested, and was reminded of the urgency of his mission. He decided to-
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Post by ashblossom on Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:52 pm

(bout dang time someone added to this)

continue with his plan to tunnel around the arachnid nest. He picked up his trusty pick, and quickly lengthened his little tunnel. When he could no longer hear the noises of the spiders, he changed his course, and once again found himself back in the old shaft. Torch in hand, he traveled down deeper into the mines.

He kept walking for an extremely long period of time with no occurences, until up ahead he saw...
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Post by Tengard on Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:21 am

The Gem. He quickly rushed towards it, weary of his long-and tired journey. As he came closer the cave floor below him started to shake powerfully! Green flames burst from the floor, and the cavern was filled with eerie moans and groans as the gorilla King and his army surrounded Daniel.

The miner shook in fear, but froze when he saw some of the gorillas resembled those from his old camp....Daniel roared in rage and charged straight ahead for the gorilla King, discarding his torch, and readying his pick and enchanted sword in his hands. The gorilla King followed, and all the other gorillas fell behind him.

There was an intense roar of sound as Daniel met the gorilla King, swinging his sword. The King roared in pain as the sword struck him across his face, but slammed Daniel with his large axe. Daniel cried in pain as he was launched back and looked up to see hundreds of spirits enclosing around him. He looked behind him to see the dark gem.... But how to destroy it, while facing an army of gorillas!

Getting an idea, Daniel quickly looked to the chasms of ever-churning flame and magma and made up his mind. Even though no one would probably know of his great deed, he had decided to-

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Post by Faelar Laelither on Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:37 am

..Get to the gem and hurl it into the chasm, even if he had to throw himself in along with it.

And so Daniel charged through the masses of spectres that had surrounded him, and he felt a chilling pain as he did so, his strength draining from their ghastly, incorporeal touch.

There it was- finally! He was making it to the gem, despite all odds. Despite the hundreds of spirits all around him, and despite the fact that his life would soon come to an end. It was almost too good to be true- and that's because it was.

Daniel suddenly felt a cold hand grab him by the back of his shirt, and he was forced to spin around- where he saw the spirit that led him here.

The spirit gave him a cruel smile. "Surprise, surprise, Daniel..." With a blast of dark magic, he sent poor Daniel plummeting into the burning chasms below.

The unholy gem began to glow ominously from where it sat, and the malicious spirit approached it, performing dark incantations. "I needed you to be close to the gem..so I could add you to our ranks. My army needs a new general- and you, Daniel, shall be reborn as he- and reborn in hellfire!"

All of the surrounding spectres- even the alleged king- formed a ring around the gem and kneeled before their true leader. The spirit turned his gaze down into the burning chasm, and then made a simple gesture with his hand. The severed spirit of Daniel floated out of the chasm, glowing with unholy fire.

"Now, Daniel..a time will soon come when bodies fill the countryside. A time will come when the world thinks they are safe- when they think the battle is over. When that time comes, lead my army and subjugate the Dawnlands!"

Daniel nodded woodenly, and proceeded out of the caverns, the army of the dead following behind him.

(And there's another Intermission event when that rolls around.)

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