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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:33 am

Like a ninja, marcus swung off the bracnh hung for a second then dropped onto the pig's back.

it tried to throw him off, but to no avail...
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:35 am

With his bare hands, Marcus began to strangle the pig, which initially squealed in pain before gradually suffocating. Eventually, a meaty carcass was in Marcus' hands, but he was exhausted and hungry.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Darkborne on Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:42 am

Too exhausted to collect lumber, Marcus walked back to the branch he kicked down earlier and set it up in his makeshift campsite. With the cliff to his back, heavy tree cover to his left and a raging river to his right, Marcus would only have to watch 1 direction. It wasn't ideal, but it would do for now. Marcus dug a fire pit and...

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Thu Mar 24, 2011 1:33 pm

Started to gather the materials to make a home when lucky him, he found some clay!

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Darkborne on Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:14 am

He noted its location, as it would be useful later. Marcus set up the pig above the fire pit, tied to a spit with some bits of dry, woven roots. He smiled in anticipation for the meal he was about to enjoy when he realized something....

He had no matches.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:03 am

...took out some extra wood that he posessed, and lit a fire with the power of friction. Exhausted but triumphant, Marcus lit a small fire and eventually ate the savory swine.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:49 am

After eating he was content for the day so he drifted of to sleep by the fire...

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Post by Darkborne on Fri Mar 25, 2011 7:01 am

A loud clicking sound woke Marcus with a start, and adrenaline shot through his body. with the images of the horrors of this island fresh in his mind he jumped to his feet, eager to avoid meeting whatever the clicking, squealing creature was. He kicked dirt on the dying embers of the fire, grabbed his pack and retreated to the tree at the edge of the cliff. He jumped into its canopy and hid himself in the branches.

A spider the size of a small vehicle jumped onto the scene. It crawled around for a few moments and took some bites out of the meat before grabbing the pic carcass and crawling away.

Content to stay in the branches for the rest of the night, Marcus picked a comfortable branch, and waited...

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Fri Mar 25, 2011 7:05 am

For Sunrise.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by SamJul on Fri Mar 25, 2011 7:31 pm

A new day dawned, and Marcus had a surge of energy within him. He climbed down from his branch and chopped down a tree, with his callused hands. Lucky it didn't hurt him, he then started to make a pick axe and a furnace to from the cobble he gained from the creeper explosions. "I'm ready" he said with a breath. Next he...
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Fri Mar 25, 2011 7:53 pm

fist bumped himself as a morale boost, then set off towards...


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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:51 am

The cave that he had came from ready to find that coal.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:53 am

Soon he found it, but at the mouth of the cave, a large sheep blocked the way inside, staring towards him with a cross-eyed look on its face.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Admin on Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:23 am

He approached the sheep slaughtering it and collecting the wool for later use and continued on his journey.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:39 am

*decides that the never-ending story is actually coming to an end*

Marcus proceeded down the cavern, which lead to a large vein of coal. It was quite dark, and Marcus's gaze was focused on the upper cave walls, where the coal vein rested. Suddenly, he fell through a gap in the floor, and toppled into a strange cavern. Within the cavern was the skeletal body of a fallen adventurer that did not stir or attack. Marcus inspected the skeleton and discovered something horrifying- this skeleton was once his father.

suddenly, he heard a noise that he had heard in his dreams that had haunted him at night- abberant noises that didn't belong in the world. He heard a chirping noise, and a ball of molten slag came flying at him as he inspected his fathers body- flesh, blood and bone decorated the cavern as Marcus's life came to a vicious end.

The ghast drifted over the gory crater it created, and chirped with delight. Suddenly, it was struck by a hail of arrows that shredded through the creatures rotted carapace. The arrows overwhelmed the monster, and it's senses failed, the beast toppling into the crater of death.

The group of adventurers inspected the area.

"Looks like we were too late.." Faelar said.
"You shouldn't have let that ghast loose, fae!" Receptiveraptor replied.
"I thought it was in an enclosed space- I figured it wouldn't break out.." Faelar said with a frown.

The two leaders of the party watched as their fellow adventurers salvaged what was left, and they headed home, the dawn of the sun greeting their return.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:35 pm

Wow, that's an epic story...

So um, who wants to compile it?

XD

I might, I'll make a new post with a DL link if I do.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:06 pm

great story... why the **** wasnt i included?


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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:10 pm

Compiled and ready to download, do we want to post this on the Minecraft forums?

under the fan art section *volunteers to if we want too*


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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:10 pm

sounds good
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:12 pm

Compiled.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:50 am

SgtKickMe wrote:great story... why the **** wasnt i included?

sorry, sgt. I was honestly thinking of putting you in, but I couldn't find any way to do so..=/

also, my name is not in the compiled list.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:34 am

I know how to fit them in, we make a second story, a journey about the travellers loooking for them, maybe they all died one way or another except fae and I?

Who knows?

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:33 am

ReceptiveRaptor wrote:I know how to fit them in, we make a second story, a journey about the travellers loooking for them, maybe they all died one way or another except fae and I?

Who knows?

Perhaps, but when I was referring to the adventurers, I was vaguely and subtly referring to the rest of the community. However, we can make them nameless people if we want to XD
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:58 am

I meant having names :P

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:59 am

ReceptiveRaptor wrote:I meant having names :P

wouldn't our community members take offense to their violent deaths in a story?
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