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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by fire_lord_pi on Sun May 08, 2011 7:09 pm

( wow, this is the ssecond time i epicly failed at trying to kill some people off. Once again i aplologize, i thought he brought some of the bread down to the mine where he lived. I was apparently wrong.)

The attackers saw they where outmatched and began to flee, but in the distance plumes of black smoke rose from Hollowvale...

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Sun May 08, 2011 8:02 pm

As the attackers fled, Faelar decided to unleash some of his power to do the remaining enemies in. His hands began to glow, and then crackle with lightning. Streaks of lightning shot from his hands and met the fleeing undead, and electrocuted them painfully, lightning arcing and dancing from target to target. Several of the fleeing attackers collapsed.

(these constant catastrophes are really screwing with the story. How about we actually be able to do stuff without constant problems?)
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by fire_lord_pi on Sun May 08, 2011 11:10 pm

(Okay, but every story needs a conflict how about you go to hallowvale and find out who is doing all this. Btw rememer its burning and there are hoards of demonic wolves. It'd be more interesting if you were more in depth with the story instead of "i blow them all up". If you disagree just say so)

Faelar mighty powers had worked their wonders. But one enemy remained, cowering in a corner, wimpering. Perhaps he could be usefull...

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Dethane on Sun May 08, 2011 11:14 pm

(I agree with Fae, a nice stroll through Sanctuary would be a nice change of pace)
*Kadafi flash-steps to the enemy in the corner, and traps it in a miniature cage, and then proceeds to lower the gate so as to not let any more unwanted intruders to come and sighs* "Well, I guess I should welcome you to Sanctuary, since you did just save me from some work. Also Symon, I apologize for my actions, I'm wary of people entering." *Kadafi begins a tour of Sanctuary, first with the Town Hall*
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Mon May 09, 2011 3:58 am

(Why do you always flash-step? is that your power or something?)
Raptor doesn't believe Kadafi is sincerely sorry and thus doesn't drop his guard.

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by fire_lord_pi on Mon May 09, 2011 6:29 am

(i dont know how to add anything because i dont want to speak for anyone. I suppose you dislike the idea of Hollowvale burning so you've decided to ignore it. Regardless, this story seems a little to aimless i suggest something exciting or an actual plot line.)

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Mon May 09, 2011 7:45 am

fire_lord_pi wrote:(i dont know how to add anything because i dont want to speak for anyone. I suppose you dislike the idea of Hollowvale burning so you've decided to ignore it. Regardless, this story seems a little to aimless i suggest something exciting or an actual plot line.)

(patience, fire. all good things to those who wait. I have an idea if people are interested, but for now, I want to give others a chance, and allow some casual moments in the story, allowing the characters to roleplay outside of battle.)
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Mon May 09, 2011 1:31 pm

Symon stopped behind the group,
"I have no intention of wasting time with a tour, i will get some fresh air and wait outside the city"
Symon straightend his jacket, sheathed his axe and found a tall tree to relax in while he waited
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Mon May 09, 2011 1:38 pm

(fire we have a plot line, read the first story and the ideas for the second one, ???, profit)

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by fire_lord_pi on Tue May 10, 2011 6:30 am

(well if your going to pull the all good things for waiters phrase i really can't argue. So ill be patient. Im not gonna add because someone else might really want to relax.)

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Dethane on Tue May 10, 2011 8:11 am

(err, I got nothing.)
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Tue May 10, 2011 10:46 am

(this story is going nowhere at breakneck speed)
(BUMP)
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Faelar Laelither on Tue May 10, 2011 11:08 am

(honestly, if this current story was made into a collab, it would be pathetic. Start over to the point where the first story ends.)
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Tue May 10, 2011 11:33 am

Faelar Laelither wrote:(honestly, if this current story was made into a collab, it would be pathetic. Start over to the point where the first story ends.)

(Maybe only the people who did the first one should do the second? Just saiyin...)

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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Tue May 10, 2011 12:05 pm

ReceptiveRaptor wrote:
Faelar Laelither wrote:(honestly, if this current story was made into a collab, it would be pathetic. Start over to the point where the first story ends.)

(Maybe only the people who did the first one should do the second? Just saiyin...)

alittle mean but id almost second this decision
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Thu May 12, 2011 10:29 am

*Symon shot him in the head with a revolver for making a stupid post*
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Dethane on Thu May 12, 2011 10:43 am

SgtKickMe wrote:*Symon shot him in the head with a revolver for making a stupid post*
(*shrug* at least it was a post.)
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by HereticalPsycho on Thu May 12, 2011 10:44 am

lol
somebody should just delete every post made since the first story and start fresh
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by Dethane on Thu May 12, 2011 10:48 am

I think that would work out just fine.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by BubbleOintmentXD on Thu May 12, 2011 11:38 am

Would you like me to Delete every single post in this thread?
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by BubbleOintmentXD on Fri May 13, 2011 11:45 am

(Deleted some of it. Do the rest later) Please do not post. As Raptor said. It is a very tedious process.
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Re: Never-Ending Story!

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Fri May 13, 2011 11:58 am

Last post to delete is the first one here:
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(might want to delete this post last)

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