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The story of the Dawn of Time.

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The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by SamJul on Mon Jun 06, 2011 7:15 am

Notice: This story is only being made because I invented Hollowvale. If whoever owns it now does not like the story, I will remove it.

Chapter 1:

Once upon a time, there was a skeleton by the name of Frazz. He was not of the living, nor dead. But he gave life to what we know now as the dawn of time. He took one sweep of his hand, and he made the ground on which we step. With his icy cold breath, he made the clouds and the westward winds. He picked up a piece of dirt, and put so much pressure on it, he made a jewel that shown so very brightly. With that, he called it "The Sun", and placed it high into the sky so everyone could see. Then, he summoned his royal guardians, who became the protectors of the earth, sun, and clouds. He uttered the words "The Dawn of Time", and fled towards his domain. The guardians, who saw fit to make the land prosper, did some creating of their own. Faelar, one of the guardians, made the platation, grass, and trees. ReceptiveRaptor, on the other hand, created the men and women of the land, as well as the fauna. This marked the beginning.

Chapter 2:

So, with all of them, they created a wonderful town. They created Dawnbay, a glorious city in the mountains. But all was not well. There was evil upon them, as a man known as "Whytrykid" decided it wasn't good enough for him. He tried to create of his own, and in doing so, made evil. Frazz, knowing this, sent his guardians to deminish the threat. In the removal of the Griefer (as they now called them) the evil still stayed. A man by the name of Auron, knew of this threat. So, Auron made a town to house, and keep the evil away. He locked it up in a church (which is now destroyed) and kept it there. He named the area Hollowvale, and left. But in doing so, the evil only spread. It made zombies and skeletons (which were not like Frazz), spiders and ghasts, and worst of all, creepers. It went all down hill from there.

Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:

Log:
6/5/2011: Finished Chapters 1 & 2. Work still in progress, need suggestions/missing parts.

Comment below if you hate or love it, and what I should do.

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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by ReceptiveRaptor on Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:15 am

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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by Faelar Laelither on Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:45 am

A pretty good story!
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by BubbleOintmentXD on Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:52 am

(I'm the owner of Hollowvale)
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by Faelar Laelither on Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:55 am

He knows, but he was its original creator.
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by BubbleOintmentXD on Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:07 am

I know, he said to whoever the new owner is of Hollowvale.
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by superscope1 on Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:07 pm

I wonder... Should we give all the towns a lore?

Also, great story :D Looks good so far ^_^

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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by mimmyjambo on Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:45 pm

scope, that's a pretty good idea methinks.
Great story, BTW, looking forward to Chapter 3.
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by SamJul on Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:56 pm

I need something to write about, I can't take over someone's story.

Give me ideas?
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by Faelar Laelither on Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:40 am

superscope1 wrote:I wonder... Should we give all the towns a lore?

Also, great story :D Looks good so far ^_^

I'd be willing to come up with something. At Samjuls permission, however, it would also involve "enhancing" certain parts of the origin story.

Additionally, Sanctuary already has lore, so I will not be touching that unless Thorbin requests me to.
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by SamJul on Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:26 am

I accept to the enhancing.
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Re: The story of the Dawn of Time.

Post by Faelar Laelither on Tue Jun 07, 2011 5:16 am

Very well! I will present my work in the near future.
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